Animation looks right, but these jokes are busted man. I think you might be trying to hard with your script. Try using real life events or something unique to set yourself apart
Not trying to discourage you or anything, hope to see your next episode succeed.
Appreciate the critique, and the time you gave for it. It can only get better, right? :p
so much potential, cant wait to see it finished
That voice sounds like the old man from 8 crazy nights, that adam Sandler movie
Hahaha! Whitey! I bet he's had some influence on me.
how high do you gotta be to make this?? haha audio needs some work, but idk what this was about
waiting for story
Great animation man, like how you split the text messages across the screen and color coded it. Feel like you need better transitions and audio was a little wonky. Animation was clean, and clean toons too!
Yeah I hope to improve my audio Editting skills. Thanks a lot.
Great animation, needs a little spit and polish but great job. I feel like it needs more audio diversity. The same screaming kill voice on loop kinda kills your hard work. Keep at it!
Wtf was this!! Man, I bet a few more bowls and I would have shit my pants. Creepy award of the day. Whatever your smoking keep that shit over there. Haha keep at it man!
Looks like a lost episode of athf. Haha.
Think you got this in the wrong rating category, and I have no idea what is going on. The animation style was unique, but I think having an outline on the toons would help give it some definition. Keep practicing tho. I hope I didn't discourage you.
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