i see a story in this song. amazing job. i feel like you can write a story about pandas swimming than it rains and thank they get our and thier lives are flashed forward thru time in 3rd prospective. you later find out its someones will of living and all the memories that have shared with there kids, you pan out and you see a panda laying down weeszing and happy to se child one last time before passing on, either with an iv drip, or in the rain.